Greeting Paragraph
In Kuwait, male friends usually shake hands with three (3) kisses on one side cheek. While female friends greet each other with four (4) kisses on the cheek, two (2) in each side. The greeting between male and female friends is by a firm handshake. With a two strangers situation, they usually smile without any shaking.
Note: * I’m not sure about what’s written above, because it’s according to my experience only !!!! !!
Hiba B. al-Shaiji.
posted by group1 @ 9:28 AM
1 Comments:
You have done a good job on this assignement. I liked the way you descirbed a greeting situation between people from the same or opposite gender, in Kuwait. However, a few grammatical errors were noticed. Here is one error where you wrote: " a 4 kisses on the cheek (2 in each side alternatively)". That sentence should read:
[Four (4) kisses on the cheek; two (2)on each side].
I am not sure about what you meant by the word, (alternatively), though; therefore, it is better to delete, or replace with another word. Tell me exactly what you want to say and I might be able to help you then.
Please read your paragraph carefuly to find similar grammatical errors; edit them and then republish your post.
By the way, who are you? Please provide your name at the end of your post.
Thank you for your cooperation.
EfS 162 Instructor: Buthaina
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